Thursday, September 29, 2011

Uno, Dous...

~Poem Uno~
I love to ride my bicycle
It is so very very fun
I love to ride it in the sun
But I never would ever want it away

(I started the first three lines in a trochaic meter, and ended it in a anapestic meter. I did this, because I wanted to add a certain Shel Silverstein-esque feel to the poem; and I'm hoping I succeeded in that.)

~Poem Dos~
I have never been
So close to the edge of it
So close to falling
Falling farther and farther
Into a new love

(I started it out as a normal Tanka poem, but then ended it with 5 syllables, as if it isn't a Tanka, but a Haiku sandwich! I did this, because I love the length of Tanka poems, and love the patterns of Haikus, so why not combine the two?)

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